From 97920455943683bfed1b3e4659765a42e4903a81 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: brutzman <brutzman@nps.edu>
Date: Sun, 14 May 2023 09:27:50 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] improved descriptions

---
 distribution.html | 50 +++++++++++++++++++++++------------------------
 1 file changed, 24 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-)

diff --git a/distribution.html b/distribution.html
index f7ea678caa..53c02deab2 100644
--- a/distribution.html
+++ b/distribution.html
@@ -53,13 +53,14 @@
             </li>
             <li>
                 <a href="https://savage.nps.edu/opendis7-java/javadoc/index.html" target="_blank">opendis7-java Javadoc</a>
+                provides full documentation of classes and methods for Java programmers
             </li>
             <li>
                 <a href="https://savage.nps.edu/opendis7-java/opendis7-full.jar">opendis7-full.jar</a>
                 is the latest recommended version for use.
                 It is a 
                 "<a href="https://stackoverflow.com/questions/19150811/what-is-a-fat-jar" target="_blank">fat&nbsp;jar</a>"
-                (~210MB) which contains all of the following:
+                (~210MB) which integrates all of the following:
                 
                 <ul>
                     <li>
@@ -77,29 +78,26 @@
         </ul>
             
         <p>
-            Experimental XML encoding for DIS Protocol version&nbsp;7, allowing further 
+            Experimental XML encoding for DIS Protocol version&nbsp;7, enabling opportunities for further 
             "<a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Big_data" target="_blank">big data</a>"
-            validation and conversion opportunities.
-            Current work is testing and building upon these capabilities.
-            <ul>
-                <li>    
-                    XML Schema
-                    <a href="https://github.com/open-dis/opendis7-source-generator/blob/master/xml/DIS_7_2012.autogenerated.xsd" target="_blank">DIS_7_2012.autogenerated.xsd</a>
-                </li>
-                <li>    
-                    <a href="https://savage.nps.edu/opendis7-java/xml/SchemaDocumentation/DIS_7_2012.autogenerated.html" target="_blank">DIS7 PDU XML Schema Documentation</a>
-                </li>
-                <li>    
-                    generated from original 
-                    <a href="https://github.com/open-dis/opendis7-source-generator/tree/master/xml/dis_7_2012" target="_blank">XML for PDUs design templates</a>
-                    by Don McGregor
-                </li>
-                <li>    
-                    XML Schema
-                    <a href="https://github.com/open-dis/opendis7-source-generator/blob/master/xml/DIS_7_2012.autogenerated.xsd" target="_blank">DIS_7_2012.autogenerated.xsd</a>
-                </li>
-            </ul>
+            validation and conversion.
+            Current work is testing and building upon these potential capabilities.
         </p>
+        <ul>
+            <li>    
+                XML Schema
+                <a href="https://github.com/open-dis/opendis7-source-generator/blob/master/xml/DIS_7_2012.autogenerated.xsd" target="_blank">DIS_7_2012.autogenerated.xsd</a>
+            </li>
+            <li>    
+                <a href="https://savage.nps.edu/opendis7-java/xml/SchemaDocumentation/DIS_7_2012.autogenerated.html" target="_blank">DIS7 PDU XML Schema Documentation</a>
+            </li>
+            <li>    
+                generated from original 
+                <a href="https://github.com/open-dis/opendis7-source-generator/tree/master/xml/dis_7_2012" target="_blank">XML for PDUs design templates</a>
+                by Don McGregor
+            </li>
+        </ul>
+        
         <p>
             Codebase design and production:
         </p>
@@ -122,14 +120,14 @@
             <i>Go!</i>
         </p>
         
-        <p>
+        <blockquote>
 This course is an introduction to distributed communications in simulation applications.
 Topics include introduction to the TCP/IP protocol stack,
-socket communications including TCP/UDP unicast/multicastm and essential protocol design issues.
+socket communications including TCP/UDP unicast/multicast and essential protocol design issues.
 Follow-on emphasis is Distributed Interactive Simulation (DIS) Protocol application programming,
 with side looks at High Level Architecture (HLA). Course activity focuses on creation and testing
 of network programming network code and web-browser applications.
-        </p>
+        </blockquote>
 
         <ul>
             <li>
@@ -160,7 +158,7 @@ of network programming network code and web-browser applications.
             Questions, suggestions, additions and comments about this opendis distribution products page are welcome.
             Please send them to
             <a href="https://faculty.nps.edu/brutzman" target="_blank">Don&nbsp;Brutzman</a>
-            (<a href="mailto:brutzman%20at%20nps.edu%20(Don%20Brutzman)?subject=feedback:%20opendis%20distribution%20"><i>brutzman&nbsp;at&nbsp;nps.edu</i></a>).
+            (<a href="mailto:brutzman%20at%20nps.edu%20(Don%20Brutzman)?subject=feedback:%20opendis7-java%20distribution%20"><i>brutzman&nbsp;at&nbsp;nps.edu</i></a>).
         </blockquote>
 
         <blockquote>
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