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 <div align="center">[NSAA Annapolis, U.S. Naval Academy Military Installation Resilience Plan and 3DVE Pilot video](NSAA_USNA_3D_Viewer_Demonstration_Video_022522_v5.mp4) (with [screenshot](AnnapolisVersarSplashScreen2022.png))</div>
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-This work was supervised by Naval Support Activity Annapolis (NSAA).  Commercial contractors Versar, CEG, and a small dynamic team of partners provided results.  Multiple stakeholders include USNA, NSAA,
-Naval Facilities Engineering Services Command (NAVFAC), and Commander of Naval Installation Command (CNIC).  Naval Postgraduate School (NPS) provided technical expertise and tools for model validation.
+Naval Support Activity Annapolis (NSAA), home of the United States Naval Academy (USNA), 
+is located at the confluence of the Severn River and Chesapeake Bay.
+The campus is vulnerable to storm surge associated with major weather events as well as
+localized, nuisance flooding that is primarily the result of high tides and 
+sustained easterly or southerly winds. Since 1929, the relative sea level in Annapolis 
+has risen approximately 1.06 ft, which has significantly increased the occurrences 
+of nuisance flooding from 2-3 times per year to 30-40 times per year and 
+left USNA more vulnerable to major storms such as Hurricane Isabel in 2003. 
+Impacts from storm surges and nuisance flooding affect daily operations through
+ closures of flooded roads, sidewalks and building entry points. 
+With greater frequency and increased amounts of water, the negative impacts 
+are being increasingly felt throughout USNA operations. Long-term impact, 
+without future action, places many of USNA’s buildings and monuments as well as the 
+effective execution of the mission of the Academy at risk.
 
 ## Prior Demonstrations of Interest
 
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 <!--[Virginia Tech CUBE Walkthrough presentation](VirtuWorlds_NSAA_USNA_Cube_Video_05022022.pptx) -->
 
-Naval Support Activity Annapolis (NSAA), home of the United States Naval Academy (USNA), 
-is located at the confluence of the Severn River and Chesapeake Bay.
-The campus is vulnerable to storm surge associated with major weather events as well as
-localized, nuisance flooding that is primarily the result of high tides and 
-sustained easterly or southerly winds. Since 1929, the relative sea level in Annapolis 
-has risen approximately 1.06 ft, which has significantly increased the occurrences 
-of nuisance flooding from 2-3 times per year to 30-40 times per year and 
-left USNA more vulnerable to major storms such as Hurricane Isabel in 2003. 
-Impacts from storm surges and nuisance flooding affect daily operations through
- closures of flooded roads, sidewalks and building entry points. 
-With greater frequency and increased amounts of water, the negative impacts 
-are being increasingly felt throughout USNA operations. Long-term impact, 
-without future action, places many of USNA’s buildings and monuments as well as the 
-effective execution of the mission of the Academy at risk.
-
 ## Project Team
 
-Swift River Versar JV is assisting NSAA meet these challenges by reviewing 
+This work was supervised by Naval Support Activity Annapolis (NSAA).  
+Commercial contractors Versar, CEG, and a small dynamic team of partners provided results.  
+Multiple stakeholders include USNA, NSAA,
+Naval Facilities Engineering Services Command (NAVFAC), and Commander of Naval Installation Command (CNIC).  
+The Naval Postgraduate School (NPS) provided technical expertise and tools for X3D model visualization and validation.
+
+Swift River Versar JV assisted NSAA meet these challenges by reviewing 
 NSAA/USNA past studies, reports and data collection efforts and providing 
-planning guidance that will address sea level rise, coastal flooding, storm surge 
-and stormwater planning and mitigation efforts.  The goal is to create a comprehensive plan, 
-project portfolio and year-by-year execution strategy to cohesively address these natural hazards.
+planning guidance to address sea level rise, coastal flooding, storm surge 
+and stormwater planning and mitigation efforts.  Long-term goal possibilities include
+creation of a comprehensive plan and project portfolio that includes a
+year-by-year execution strategy to cohesively address these continuing natural hazards.
 
 ## Project Implications